Tuesday, September 15, 2009

Unit 3-Assignment 1

How can growing up be both exciting and painful?
Growing up can be exciting because you get to learn and go through all the processes of beign a teenager.It's exciting also because you get spoiled by your parents and get lots of things. When your growing up,you still have the mind to think what you want to be when you get older.So you might have an favorite athelte or something while growing up,and when your older,you can folow your dreams.It can be painful because you can go places where the big kids go until you grow on up.The most painful thing is that going through all of the illness,when your little,and thats a big problem in growing up.Painful things are when you have to go to the doctor to get a shot,and it hurts very bad,because your a little kid,and when you grow older,it doesnt hurt anymore.

2 comments:

  1. I like your aspect on both subjects. I like how you portrayed that being younger doesnt necessairly have to be uneventful and can still be exciting. Good Job!

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  2. Good examples in this post. I like how you getting spoiled was one of your exciting memories from growing up, but I will tell you that shots still hurt even when you're an adult! :)

    Some small errors that I can help you fix for maximum points. As is 17/20 points.

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